"...auch eine moderne Stadt, die mit der Zeit geht
I used that one, sounded best in my ears! :) Thankies! :D
I like this ending better too, but I'm not especially satisfied with it, but at least it sounds like an ending! :p Figured I had to change it, lol! I always end up with cliché endings on my German essays! lol!
*g* As long as they are grammatically correct, I don't think your teacher should have much to say against cliché endings. With the topics teachers usually give for essays, you can't do much else than write clichés in the first place. *L*
Yeah, I know, most essay topics, especially in German, are bound to end up like clichés! I can't say that everything is grammatically correct, but my essays are apparantly a lot better than the ones the others write. I get mostly 5+ or 6'es on my essays, most others get from 0-3, very few of them being 3... :P
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Date: 2004-08-29 08:32 am (UTC)I used that one, sounded best in my ears! :) Thankies! :D
I like this ending better too, but I'm not especially satisfied with it, but at least it sounds like an ending! :p Figured I had to change it, lol! I always end up with cliché endings on my German essays! lol!
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Date: 2004-08-29 02:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-08-30 10:39 am (UTC)